Edith's Freshman Composition Journal

Wednesday, November 09, 2005

journal # 31 My Birthday....

My birthday is in about four day, on November 13. I will be turning 18 years old. For my birthday my friends and i are going for a road trip to flagstaff. We are planning on living on Saturday aftenoon and be back on Monday. I want to have so much fun and be with the people i love. Moreover, if all my friends are going it will be great because we are going to be together. I decided to go to Flagstaff because it is a place were you can relax also the weather is nice up there.

Wednesday, November 02, 2005

journal # 30 how to write an essay?

How to wite an essay? First of all you would have to do a prewriting such as; brainstorming, listing, questioning, mapping, journaling, and discussing. Second, planning like organizing ideas. After, you would do a draft which you will include a topic sentence, supporting ideas, and a concluding sentece. when done writing you would have to do a revising, doing adding and subtracting ideas and reorganizing. Finally, you do the editing, checking grammar, speling, ponctuation, and mechanics. when done with all that you would have to type the final draft.

journal # 29 best commercial a ever seen.....

The best commercial i ever seen that i liked is the one they do for verizon wireless. When all the people is looking at the shakira video and dancing. All the people that have the video on the phone are making the moves shakira does. Moreover, it is very funny because all kinds of people does it. From Teenagers to adults. Finally, I have liked that commercial since i saw it because am a big fan of shakira and i like how she dances.

Monday, October 31, 2005

journal #28 what i hate most about technology

What i hate most about technology in life, class, and general is that you have to read and do things right. If you dont read correct you will be getting things wrong. For example, if you doing a quiz on a computer, you will have to read the directions clearly and understand them to get them right. Also, if you get things wrong you cant go back and do them again.

Wednesday, October 26, 2005

journal #27 the one piece of technology i enjoy using

The one piece of technology you enjoy using is my cell phone. I enjoy using my cell phone because i can text and call my friends. When am bored i start texting them or calling them. I think the phone is really helpful because in an emergency you can call for help. Most of the time there is a problem and you can solve it by calling someone ask ask. Also, I enjoy my cell phone because i can call my friends to see how everything is doing. So my cell phone is a piece of technology i enjoy using.

Monday, October 24, 2005

journal #26 my favorite thing to do

My favorite thing to do is go shopping like all girl does. I like to go to the mall and spend a lot of time shopping. When i go have to have time because i like to see all around it until i find something i really like. Almost every pay check i spend some in cloths and things i like. That is not every check because i have to pay my truck. If i didn't had to pay my truck i would had the chance to spend more money on clothes. I know that is bad but, i like that.

Monday, October 17, 2005

journal #25 School

School has been great so far. I have learned many things in all my classes. For example in my math class i have how to work variables and how to they are added in problems. I my English class i have learned how to create good sentences and how to create a good essay. Both of my classes are great and fun. What i dislike about school is that we get homework, but i cant do anything about it. I figured a way to deal with homework. I make sure that everything is on time that way i dont have to worry i have many homework to do.

journal #24 if someone got infront for me on a line

If someone would get in front of me while i was in the movies line i would tell them what are they doing. Also i would tell them if they dont see that averybody is making a line.I think it is not fair that when you are in line and someone would walk in front of you and just like nothing got in line in front of you looking that everybody if in line. Moreover, i know they would talk to me back, but since i don't like to argue i would just live it how it is. Why get in a fight that is not a big deal? i would just tell them not to do it again.

Monday, October 10, 2005

journal # 23 an icecream with no money...


How emberasing that would be? If one time i would go out to buy an ice cream. well i got to the ice cream shop, i got on line and ordered my ice cream. At the time when i had to pay my ice cream and i was looking through my purse. I couldn't find my money but, i was sure that i had doughted with me. Well, that would be so emberasing. I would tell them that i had forgaten my money and i was going to be right back that it was on my car. Later, i think i would never go back to that place ever again.